Sunday 8 July 2012

SS - Unknown Desire - Part 17


PART – 17



Yash: Geet, Bro never celebrates his birthday with us…… He is always out………

Geet: But this Birthday he will be with us………

Yash: Nahi Geet…. He is always out with his friends on his birthday…..

Meera: Par Kyu????

Yash: Pata Nahi……..

Geet: Ha to let him celebrate him tomorrow with his friends tonight we will celebrate……..

Yash does not say anything looking at the excitement on Geet’s face and prays in his heart that her heart does not get broke……..

All three does lot of shopping and comes back with lots of bags…….. Savitri who was sitting in the hall reading magazine was stunned to see all this……..

Savitri: What is all this????

Geet full of excitement: Mom we have done all this shopping for Maan….. It’s his birthday no tomorrow……… We will give him surprise tonight…..

Savitri: But Geet, Maan……..

Geet: Maa you also don’t say like Yash that Maan is always out with his friends on his birthday………

Savitri: But that is the fact……..

Geet: But why Maa?

Savitri: It is all our fault for all this kind of behaviour……… I am wholly responsible for this……… The time when he needed us the most we were never there and now……..

She does stop

Geet: Why are you saying this Maa………. Aap to kitne ache ho……

Savitri: Geet……… You know when Maan was very small our business was not at that height as it is today…… We use to struggle a lot….. I and Maan’s Dad use to work day and night…….. Slowly and steadily Maan started becoming big…….. He use to see other kids how they use to celebrate their birthday….. Maan was very understandable at that time…. But then our hard work paid and our business also started touching new height…… then we would not have time for him as the circle started increasing and to maintain that standard Maan’s Dad insisted to go to all the parties…….. So Maan was always left alone…… Maan ki birthday celebrate karma to Maan ke papa ka shirf bahana hota tha infact he use to celebrate Maan’s birthday only because he can organize a party for his business associate……… Maan would see other kids having all sort of fun and that went into in his head…… Yash was too small to understand all this……… As Maan came into his college his friends would ask him to give party and he would ask his father and his father never objected to it saying that he does not have time for all this…. If I objected to it …… He would simply say If he wants to celebrates his birthday with his friends then let him do it anyways I don’t have time for all this and this way he just went of our hand…… He is a very good by heart but just because of our carelessness we lost our real Maan….. and after the death of Maan’s father I handled the business till the time Maan became matured to handle it and I am proud that Maan had taken this business to much more height but the Maan which I always thought would be there I lost it by myself…….. and because of me you also are suffering………

Savitri started crying so were Yash, Meera and Geet…… Geet went to her and said: Maa but there is so much change in Maan now……..

Yash: Because he truly loves you…….. He is madly in love you……..

Geet just does not know what to say………

Meera just to lighten the mood says: I think we should start with the preparation before Maan Bhai comes………

Savitri looks at her and Meera just looks down thinking what did she say without even thinking……

Geet notices that and says: Ha bhai now Meera to meri friend kaam and…..

Meera: Shut up Geet………

Savitri: Would anyone tell me what is going on and if I am not mistaken whether what I am thinking is it right……..

Geet: Yash Maa ko javab do………

Yash: Mom who actually………..

Savitri: I like her……..

Yash jumps and hugs Savitri: Thanks Mom……..

Meera touched Savitri’s feet and took blessings…….. Geet started to tease both of them…… Savitri was infact happy to see Geet’ happy….. They all start decorating the house and plans to give a surprise to Maan…

On the other side Maan was feeling restless as he was not able to see Geet….. He was infact getting restless thinking that may she is not feeling well so she went early……..

He was not able to concentrate on his work….. so finally decided to give her a call…..

While on the other side Geet was busy preparing Maan’s favorite dishes and cake and others were busy decorating a house……….

While Geet was busy in her preparation Maan called her……..

As Geet mobile was not with her she could not hear the mobile ringing… Geet not picking the phone tensed Maan more…. He thought that he will himself go to home and enquire about her…… But he was not in a position to leave the office as there were meetings scheduled……… He was getting restless…….. Finally decided to give a call on Yash mobile…… Yash saw the call and picked it up…. Before Yash could even say anything Maan started

Maan: Yash, Geet theek hai na……… Why is she not picking up the phone……

Yash giggled at the desperation of his bro……: What is wrong with Geet….. She is perfectly fine……..

Maan could hear this and screamed: What are you laughing at??

Yash: Relax Bro….. Wait………

Yash goes near Geet and says: Someone desperately wants to talk to you….

Geet: Who???

Yash: Tum khud hi baat kar lo….

He giggles and goes away giving them privacy……



Geet took the phone and before she says  something Maan started

Maan: Geet why are you not picking up the phone…….. Are you alright…….



Geet: Relax Maan…….. I am perfectly fine……. Who My phone  is in the room so I could not hear it……. Aap itne tension mai kyu hai……….



Maan: Nahi who tum ghar jaldi chali gayi na so just for that……..



Geet lied saying that because she was having little headache she came home early……..



They both talk for sometime and then someone entered in Maan’s cabin……..



Maan holding the phone: Yes Adi…….



Adi: Sir, the meeting which was to be held in the office is shifted in the evening at the hotel………



Maan: But….. I need to go home early



Adi: But sir…. The clients insisted to have a meeting in the hotel…….



Maan: Ok….. inform them that we will be there for the meeting……



Later Adi went out Maan realized that Geet is still in the phone……..



Maan: Sorry Geet….. who meeting agayi hai…… otherwise I had planned to come home early………

Geet relaxed saying : No problem Maan, meeting is important…….. theek hai bye…….



Maan: Bye….



Geet and Maan both relaxed…….. Maan was relaxed by talking to Geet ……… and Geet was relaxed thinking that Maan will be late and they will be able to complete the preparation very well……..



Maan later went to the meeting in the hotel which was decided…….  The meeting went on very well and it was already 10.30 p.m. by the time meeting was concluded…… 

‘Finally relived that the meeting was over Maan (self talk): Finally the meeting is concluded now I can go home……..



Maan was coming out of the hotel there he found someone calling his name…..



Maan turned around and saw some of his old friends calling him……..



One friend: Hey Maan…… Yaar tu to gayab hi hogaya…….. Chal lets go to disc …..



Maan: Nahi yaar…… I have to go home…..



Second Friend: And by the way why are you not picking up our phone……



Maan: are I did not realized it also….. the phone was on silent……..  Chal yaar mai ab ghar jata hu……..



First Friend: Chal na yaar………… Ek to kitne din ke baad mila hai tu…….



All force him to come with them……. Finally Maan agrees…..



Maan:  Ok lets go……..



They all head towards the disc and they have lot of fun….. They talk and have drinks and have food……. Maan get so much involved that he totally forgets that he need to go home…….. He gets totally drunk…….



On the other side all are waiting for Maan to give him a big surprise….. But Maan ka to kuch pata hi nahi……. It was almost 12.30 at night…….



Geet is pacing in the hall waiting for Maan…….. so were others……. Suddenly they hear the voice of the car……..



Geet: Lagata hai Maan agaye…… let us get ready…….



Yash: Yes……. Bro will be so happy………..



But everthing got shattered when they saw the Maan coming with the support of his driver……..



Yash understood the situation and went to hold Maan……… Yash took Maan to his room…….. Geet was about to go behind them but was stopped by Savitri…….



Savitri: Geet….. and nods her head saying not to go…….



Geet: Nahi maa……. Nothing will happen……….



She goes to the room and tells Yash to go and she will handle….. Yash ask her again but she assures saying she will manage……….



After Yash goes Geet closes the door behind…….



Geet removes the shoes and shocks from his feet and makes him sleep properly……..  Geet was above to move when he hold her hand and pull her……



Geet: Maan……. You need to sleep……..



Maan: where are you going??? I need you………



Geet: I am not going anywhere……



Maan pulls was so strong that she landed near him…… He hold her tightly……



Maan: Are you scared of me…… isliye ja rahi ho mujhe chodkar…… But you know I won’t do anything to you…….



Geet: Nahi Maan…….. You sleep……. Maan…… please close your eyes……….





Maan: No……. You are so beautiful Geet…… You know when you are not near me…. I feel that you went away leaving me…….. Never go away from me….. I will not do anything which will hurt you ever…… I Love ……….. 

The words remain incomplete………

She starts caressing his hair to make him sleep………. While murmuring Maan goes to sleep but his hold on Geet was so strong that she was not able to move and she slept on him only……..



Precap: Maan and Geet’s reaction








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1 comment:

Nesha2017 said...

Nw she gt knew frm Savithri tat hw maan has been neglected. Preparation all goin well bt maan meeting wt all friends make him drunk.he voice out n I like his confession